Writing Lessons #1
When writing a story with a lot of named characters do not give secondary characters similar names. The Rangers on The Arrogant Lion are named Fenuchi and Fundowkoski. (Holiday and Verde as well, but they are easier to differentiate.)
The Engineering Tech is named Flavius.
This has lead to some confusion on my part and I am sure I have used Flavius and Fenuchi somewhat interchangeably even though Flavius is clearly the Engineer and Fenuchi has the additional task of being the ship’s medic.
Sorry for any confusion when reading the book.
Character: Leonard Nimoy
Affiliation: Earth Fleet (3rd Fleet)
Assignment: 255C (Long Range Recon Ship) (Temp. Assignment: The Arrogant Lion)
1st Appearance: Primary Collision
Description: Human Male, 22 years old in 2154, grew up in the Greater African Confederation
Nickname: Spock, but only called that by Captain Leo Grant who thinks it is hilarious while no one else on his ship gets the joke.
Writing Background: If you have to ask you really don’t know science fiction.