Flavius

Writing Lessons #1

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When writing a story with a lot of named characters do not give secondary characters similar names.  The Rangers on The Arrogant Lion are named Fenuchi and Fundowkoski. (Holiday and Verde as well, but they are easier to differentiate.)

The Engineering Tech is named Flavius.

This has lead to some confusion on my part and I am sure I have used Flavius and Fenuchi somewhat interchangeably even though Flavius is clearly the Engineer and Fenuchi has the additional task of being the ship’s medic.

Sorry for any confusion when reading the book.

Character: Technician Wong

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Rank: Technician One

Affiliation:  Untied Earth Fleet

Assignment:  Long Range Recon Ship

1st Appearance:  Primary Collision

Description:  Human Female, 19 years old  in 2155, short.

Nickname:  Unknown

Hobbies: Unknown

Background: Had both nose broken by Technician Flavius, was dating Technican Gakhar for a short while.

Character: Technician Gakhar

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Rank: Technician One

Affiliation:  Untied Earth Fleet

Assignment:  Long Range Recon Ship

1st Appearance:  Primary Collision

Description:  Human Male, 19 years old  in 2155, Tall, almost as big as Fia.

Nickname:  Unknown

Hobbies: Unknown

Background: Had both nose and thumb broken by Technician Flavius, was dating Technician Wong for a bit.